Comments for love2create.org http://love2create.org Kim Henry - creative writing, article and courses Mon, 26 Sep 2011 02:26:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v= Comment on Local Group in Carolina Beach Fall 2011 by Cheryl Vannoni http://love2create.org/2010/06/26/local-group-in-orgiva/comment-page-1/#comment-179 Cheryl Vannoni Mon, 26 Sep 2011 02:26:54 +0000 http://love2create.org/?p=64#comment-179 I would love to know more about your upcoming creative writing class for my child 10 yrs and possibly myself. I would love to know more about your upcoming creative writing class for my child 10 yrs and possibly myself.

]]> Comment on share your writing by kimhenry72 http://love2create.org/love2write/share-your-writing/comment-page-4/#comment-169 kimhenry72 Tue, 06 Sep 2011 22:35:08 +0000 http://love2create.org/#comment-169 The life of a mother of a two year old The exhausting ones gave way to the terrible two’s I’m not sure which one I’d rather choose No longer content to just sit and stare Now you need to be everywhere The life of a mother of a two year old My wrinkles have become so brave, so bold You won’t eat dinner or lunch for that matter breakfast is like dining with the mad hatter rivers of juice and raisins are thrown the cats get the toast and I get to groan. The life of a mother of a two year old frazzled and fried, my brain’s been sold You sleep with your head pinning down my hair I don’t have any covers but you don’t care Awake at dawn to an over active toddler mama, mama I need to make a poopa The life of a mother of a two year old your horsey, your ball and old rice cake I hold My bag’s full of extra pants and stale nuts rescue remedy and plasters for cuts I’m an expert on Nemo, know the whole script fishes' our friend, my social life's clipped The life of a mother of a two year old I was once quite interesting so I’m told Whinge, whinge whine and everythings ‘mine’ That’s not OK sweetheart, it’s really not fine! Sharing is caring but you’re not convinced my conversations have been totally minced The life of a mother of a two year old I see other harassed mama’s and I’m of their fold Jumping on my back is such a fab game My left arm will never be the same You want a pancake but you also want a cuddle Confusion, tears and tantrums,oh it’s such a muddle The life of a mother of a two year old All my best intentions were rapidly sold I haven’t written my book, my tummy’s still flabby I chat about pooh and it’s all abit crabby! No time to myself, let alone with my man Knackered by nine, my energy ran! But My little bear....... your daily kisses save my world my true path has divinely unfurled I know I am just where I’m meant to be because I am in you and you are in me You make me forget my adult perspective jumping and tickling are my new directive Your hugs hold me in a perfect frame constant new discoveries, life becomes a game Your laugh fills me with almighty powers I wonder at your breathe in the small hours I get to feast on unconditional love your hand fits mine like a God-made glove. The life of a mother of a two year old You are a blessing, a gift, a miracle to behold. The life of a mother of a two year old

The exhausting ones gave way to the terrible two’s
I’m not sure which one I’d rather choose
No longer content to just sit and stare
Now you need to be everywhere

The life of a mother of a two year old
My wrinkles have become so brave, so bold

You won’t eat dinner or lunch for that matter
breakfast is like dining with the mad hatter
rivers of juice and raisins are thrown
the cats get the toast and I get to groan.

The life of a mother of a two year old
frazzled and fried, my brain’s been sold

You sleep with your head pinning down my hair
I don’t have any covers but you don’t care
Awake at dawn to an over active toddler
mama, mama I need to make a poopa

The life of a mother of a two year old
your horsey, your ball and old rice cake I hold

My bag’s full of extra pants and stale nuts
rescue remedy and plasters for cuts
I’m an expert on Nemo, know the whole script
fishes’ our friend, my social life’s clipped

The life of a mother of a two year old
I was once quite interesting so I’m told

Whinge, whinge whine and everythings ‘mine’
That’s not OK sweetheart, it’s really not fine!
Sharing is caring but you’re not convinced
my conversations have been totally minced

The life of a mother of a two year old
I see other harassed mama’s and I’m of their fold

Jumping on my back is such a fab game
My left arm will never be the same
You want a pancake but you also want a cuddle
Confusion, tears and tantrums,oh it’s such a muddle

The life of a mother of a two year old
All my best intentions were rapidly sold

I haven’t written my book, my tummy’s still flabby
I chat about pooh and it’s all abit crabby!
No time to myself, let alone with my man
Knackered by nine, my energy ran!

But
My little bear.……

your daily kisses save my world
my true path has divinely unfurled
I know I am just where I’m meant to be
because I am in you and you are in me

You make me forget my adult perspective
jumping and tickling are my new directive
Your hugs hold me in a perfect frame
constant new discoveries, life becomes a game

Your laugh fills me with almighty powers
I wonder at your breathe in the small hours
I get to feast on unconditional love
your hand fits mine like a God-made glove.

The life of a mother of a two year old
You are a blessing, a gift, a miracle to behold.

]]> Comment on share your writing by Falls of table http://love2create.org/love2write/share-your-writing/comment-page-4/#comment-168 Falls of table Wed, 24 Aug 2011 14:38:27 +0000 http://love2create.org/#comment-168 wow ur site gave me power !!! thanks wow ur site gave me power !!! thanks

]]> Comment on share your writing by emma.d http://love2create.org/love2write/share-your-writing/comment-page-4/#comment-129 emma.d Thu, 26 May 2011 15:06:16 +0000 http://love2create.org/#comment-129 when i look up to the sky and i see the coluds rush bye,all i can thing is why,why is he not here me i want him for me nobody elts just me ,it was unfare to take him and leav me alone it was unfare to take him i grone aand i grone when i look up to the sky and i see the coluds rush bye,all i can thing is why,why is he not here

me i want him for me nobody elts just me ‚it was unfare to take him and leav me alone it was unfare to take him i grone aand i grone

]]> Comment on share your writing by emma.d http://love2create.org/love2write/share-your-writing/comment-page-4/#comment-121 emma.d Wed, 09 Mar 2011 17:35:55 +0000 http://love2create.org/#comment-121 I am lonely,i see know one around me There is no one for me to tell how i feel I feel sad , lonely and angry I want someone to come and see me. I have been waiting , I want my dad. But...i know i will never get him. I think i was the insparation of this pome , me and my feelings and i think the person i was waiting for and baddly needing was my dad and i know i couldnt have him so i gave up. I am lonely,i see know one around me
There is no one for me to tell how i feel
I feel sad , lonely and angry
I want someone to come and see me.
I have been waiting ,
I want my dad.
But…i know i will never get him.

I think i was the insparation of this pome , me and my feelings and i think the person i was waiting for and baddly needing was my dad and i know i couldnt have him so i gave up.

]]> Comment on share your writing by emma.d http://love2create.org/love2write/share-your-writing/comment-page-4/#comment-120 emma.d Wed, 09 Mar 2011 17:30:36 +0000 http://love2create.org/#comment-120 Love is like a circyle becaues there is no begining and no visible end.no one knows how love starts and no matter if you like it or not it keeps going on and on. Love is like a circyle becaues there is no begining and no visible end.no one knows how love starts and no matter if you like it or not it keeps going on and on.

]]> Comment on share your writing by emma.d http://love2create.org/love2write/share-your-writing/comment-page-3/#comment-119 emma.d Wed, 09 Mar 2011 17:26:21 +0000 http://love2create.org/#comment-119 this was as a song but i think it is ok as a pome as well.when My dad died he became the insparation for this. I miss you I miss your smile I miss the way you walked in after been gone for a while (lalalalalala) (lalalalalala) I miss you I miss you. this was as a song but i think it is ok as a pome as well.when My dad died he became the insparation for this.

I miss you
I miss your smile
I miss the way you walked in after been gone for a while (lalalalalala) (lalalalalala)
I miss you
I miss you.

]]> Comment on share your writing by emma.d http://love2create.org/love2write/share-your-writing/comment-page-3/#comment-118 emma.d Wed, 09 Mar 2011 17:22:14 +0000 http://love2create.org/#comment-118 thank you for all of your comments i love to write and i have always had something to enspire me to do so. thank you for all of your comments i love to write and i have always had something to enspire me to do so.

]]> Comment on share your writing by kimhenry72 http://love2create.org/love2write/share-your-writing/comment-page-3/#comment-87 kimhenry72 Mon, 29 Nov 2010 15:40:57 +0000 http://love2create.org/#comment-87 Emma is the young niece of one of the women in one of my writing groups - just thought I'd let you all know! A budding young writer in our midst! Let's give her lots of encouraging feedback! Emma is the young niece of one of the women in one of my writing groups — just thought I’d let you all know! A budding young writer in our midst! Let’s give her lots of encouraging feedback!

]]> Comment on share your writing by kimhenry72 http://love2create.org/love2write/share-your-writing/comment-page-3/#comment-86 kimhenry72 Mon, 29 Nov 2010 15:39:21 +0000 http://love2create.org/#comment-86 Hi Emma, well done for posting your writing! These are really lovely...full of imaginative descriptions which allows us an insight into these people in an interesting way. Gorgeous ...keep posting! Love kim x Hi Emma, well done for posting your writing! These are really lovely…full of imaginative descriptions which allows us an insight into these people in an interesting way.

Gorgeous …keep posting! Love kim x

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